Thursday, 31 January 2013

Six Character Bio


Physical Appearance
Large brutish looking robot. he has a disjointed face and a hunchback. Much lrger than any human. Close to around 7 ft.
Six is a crude construction. Built primarily for heavy lifting and to assist the creator and survivors in building the new settlement.
His body is constructed from rusted damaged salvaged metal plates. He is crudely built with only basic resemblance to humnan anatomy. His arms and legs are tubes with pistons powering them. He also has a compartment in his torso that allows easy access to his inner workings.

Rob Character Bio


Physical Appearance
Rob is a slim robot. Very much more human in build and scale than Six. He is slightly taller  than the creator maybe around 5'5 but not imposing or intimidating at all. Rob is technically better constructed than Six. Where Six is created from scrap and has rusted plates nailed on with pipes and tubes freely exposed, Rob is more streamlined efficent and built with slightly better salvage, although he does still have large areas of damaged metal plates where no other suitabel scrap could be found.
He should have a simple look about him. He should not look malicious at all. More innocent, newborn, inquisitive, curious. He also should not look cold or emotionless.
There should be a panel in his chest that can open easily for access to his inner workings and battery cell.

The Creator Character Bio

Physical Appearance
The Creator is an old human man, about 55-60 years old.  He should be fairly short, about 5ft.
He has white hair and can be balding at the top. He is often wearing techy safety goggles as he for the vast majority of his time is working on building things. He should be greasy and grimy and be quite unkempt in general due to his obsession with his work. He rarely places importance on something like hygiene, his work is too important.
One of his legs is damage from the crash. He has either salvaged some sort of existing medical leg brace or crafted on from spare parts himself.

Plot Summary


A chilling story about power, responsibility and justice set on a distant alien world in a dark, dystopian future. Rob, a robot built from scrap and salvage from a crashed ship is content with his life assisting in his creators work. Everything changes when his brother, Six begins to wonder about the nature of existence  life and death. Six embarks on a killing spree amongst survivors of their crashed ship. All that is left to Rob is to follow the trail of death and exact justice.

Monday, 28 January 2013

Script Second Draft

Second draft. Some significant changes to the structure and ending. Further revisions to come!


The Divided
Gary Welsh
INT - Workshop - Afternoon
Fade In
Black screen, flickers to a view of a room. It's the creators workshop. We are looking through the eyes of Rob, a sentient robot and our protaganist. There's a heads-up display over-layed on the screen. A warning about backup power  running low flashes on and off in one corner and the screen occasionally has a garbled flicker as he looks around the environment.

Script First Draft

What it says on the tin.


The Divided
Gary Welsh
INT - Workshop - Afternoon
Fade In
Black screen, flickers to a view of a room. It's the creators workshop. We are looking through the eyes of Rob, a sentient robot and our protaganist. There's a heads-up display over-layed on the screen. A warning about backup power running and running low flashes on and off in one corner and the screen occasionally has a garbled flicker as he looks around the environment.