The Divided
Gary Welsh
INT - Workshop - Afternoon
Fade In
Black
screen, flickers to a view of a room. It's the creators workshop. We are
looking through the eyes of Rob, a sentient robot and our protaganist. There's
a heads-up display over-layed on the screen. A warning about backup power
running low flashes on and off in one corner and the screen occasionally has a
garbled flicker as he looks around the environment.
Cut to
We cut
to an external view, looking down at the robot. He is slumped against a wall.
The doorway of the workshop is in front of him with an inner doorway on his
right and the main area of the workshop to his left. There is a largish hole in
his chest plate where he has been shot. He looks down at the wound then moves
his hand to it. We can see what looks like a damaged power cell/battery in the open
wound.
Cut to
POV shot.
The shot pans counter clockwise as he looks to his left. The pan stops when he
focuses on a human foot showing from behind a work desk. A gun is visible on
the floor beside him.
Cut to
A shot
from behind the workdesk looking up. Rob walks into the shot and is looking
down.
Cut to
Rob POV
shot. We see an old man. Dead from a gunshot wound to the chest. This is the
creator. The man who ran the scrapyard and who built Rob and Six.
The shot
pans up a and to the right where we see an image capture/photo display unit.
The screen is damaged. The image is one of the creator Rob and Six happy
together.
Fade to
Black
Fade In
EXT - Scrapyard - Day
It's
a different time. Earlier. The workshop is cleaner and brighter. Theres no dust
or debris or damage anywhere and the man from the previous scene is alive.
Shot of
the creator building Rob. Rob is just a torso at this time. The creator pulls
back a little and smiles. Six appears from one side behind the creator with
some salvaged parts. The creator looks up and smiles at him.
Cut to
Close up
of a piece of scrap sitting on a metal fence/table. A bug crawls into the
screen from one side. A gun shot hits the can. The focus switches to the
background where we can see the two robots.
Cut to
Rob and
Six. Six has helped Rob aim by adjusting his arm. They look at each other after
the shot hits and six puts his hand on Robs shoulder. The creator sits in a
rocking chair behind them smiling.
Cut to
The
three of them posing for the photograph we saw earlier.
Cut to
Shot of
the 3 from behind looking at some blueprints the creator has pinned up on a
wall for a giant communications tower/aerial. Rob and the creator look engrossed in the blueprints while Six is clearly not grasping the intricacies. He is
slightly apart from Rob and the creator in this shot.
Cut to
INT- Workshop - Night
Close
shot of Rob and the creator working on the comm tower. Six is in the background
on his own.
Cut to
EXT - Scrapyard - Day
Six
is alone in the yard standing holding something in his hand.
Cut to
Shot of
Six hand. We see the bug.
Cut to
Closeup
of Six face. He is studying the bug.
Cut to
Medium
shot of six. We cant see his palm but we see him close his fist.
SOUND
CRUNCH
He
opens it again.
Cut
to
Close
up of six face again. Studying the now obviously dead bug
Cut
to
INT - Workshop - Night
Rob
moves to the door of the workshop and looks out. Six is just standing still in
the yard, staring away into the distance.
Cut
to
Closeup
on Six. He turns his head slowly to look at Rob. Holds the look for a second
then looks back towards the town.
Fade to
Black
A
gunshot sounds.
SOUND
BANG
Fade
in
INT - Workshop Small Room - Night
Close
on Rob as his eyes light up and he reacts to the sound.
He
is in some sort of standby mode.
Cut
to
Rob
POV. He looks up from the floor to directly ahead of him. Six is standing right
in front of him with the gun aimed at him. The creators leg is visible in the
background like in the very first scene.
He
looks at Rob for a second then fires.
SOUND
BANG
Cut
to Black
EXT - Graveyard - Early Evening
Fade to
Rob burying the creator outside. It’s a graveyard near the crash
site/scrapyard. This is where casualties of the town and the initial crash have
been buried. It's an aerial view. He is
standing over the grave (a pile of stones) of the already buried creator.
Cut to
Then we
can cut to a closer view, midshot of Rob standing over the grave. In one hand
he has a shovel in the other he is awkwardly holding the gun. The creators hat
is on his back tied round his neck with some string. He turns his head.
Cut to
POV
shot. Looking at the grave, he slowly holds up the gun and looks at it. Then he
looks to his left. In the distance we can see the town. We also see the backup
power still flickering and substantially lower now.
Fade to
EXT – Plains - Evening
Long
shot. Rob is walking to the town. He is sort of limping. In the back right we
can see the crash site/scrapyard.
Fade to
EXT - Town - Dusk
Rob
arriving at the town. We can see its lifeless.
Cut to
Rob
walking into the settlement. He pauses in the middle of the street and looks
around. We see the trail of death that Six has left. There are corpses and
damage strewn around the street.
Cut to
Shot of
the Salloon. The sign flickers "End of the Road".
Cut to
INT - Salloon - Dusk
Shot of
the salloon entrance from inside. The door that still works slides open and Rob
limps in.
Cut to
Close on
Robs eyes.
Cut to
Rob POV
shot. The shot pans across the setting. Sitting on the stage is Six. Backup
power is now flickering dangerously low
Cut to
Closeup
shot on Six' eyes. They flicker to life. He looks up.
Cut to
Shot
behind Rob. Six is visible in the background.
Six stands and is shrouded in shadow with highlights gleaming off one
side of him from the windows and his eyes. Six starts towards Rob slowly. Rob
unholsters the gun.
Cut to
Close on
Six again. Rob now has the gun pointed directly at him.
Cut to
Closeup
of Robs eyes.
Cut to
Close on
Six eyes.
Cut to
Profile
shot. Rob on the right and Six on the left with the bar in the background. Rob
is aiming at Six chest
Cut to
Closeup
of the trigger as rob squeezes it.
Cut to
Close
shot of Robs head. His eyes are dark he has run out of power.
Cut to
Close on
Six. Like he is studying Rob as with the bug.
Cut to
Medium
shot. Six takes out his battery and puts it in Rob. Then gently re-positions Robs aim so the gun is pointing directly at his head.
Cut to
Profile
shot of the two as before. With the gun still aiming firmly at Six head. Robs
eyes start to light up again.
Cut to
POV shot
from Six. The gun pointed right at him.
Cut to
Black
A
gunshot sounds
SOUND
BANG
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